02 November, 2009

Mother

A mother is hard to define
She is sweet
She is nice
And very kind
She cares for her child
And never gets wild
She nurtures her youngster
And is always mild
She is empathetic
And ever so sympathetic
I love my mother
And you should as well.

3 comments:

  1. Good language & nice expression. Shld add more poetic devices 2 make it better...

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  2. sis!!! gud job bt ya ........do use sum poetic language bt keep up d gud work!!!!

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  3. i am not good in value this.....but i felt a something in it.....

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