28 March, 2010


Alone on the Beach


The waves were crashing on the shore
I, standing there, wanted to know more
I wanted to know what was on my mind
But I had to dig deep to find . .

I stood there, my eyes closed
Mourning and full of remorse
My pupils were filled with tears
And the sun was equally fierce . .

And then, to my utter surprise
I was in the midst of a mist
My mind racing, full of lists
Thinking of what to do next . .

The sun was annoyingly penetrating
I got up with a startled feeling
I was looking into the brightness
With a sudden jolt of sadness . . 

4 comments:

  1. Hmm, I liked reading it! :) Well written.

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  2. first..,i am not good enough to value you....
    you r most better than me......
    well done but i think nothing new in this.....

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  3. :):)
    good one yar
    u have a loong way to go .....
    all the best ,.....
    :)

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